Fate & Forgotten Secrets by snshyne

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Fate & Forgotten Secrets by snshyne

Let's see how snshyne describes this story: Back home Bella feels trapped in a loveless relationship. Can she be saved? Will Bella's pain and Edward's secret push them together or tear them apart? Is love enough? Rating: M, violence, AH, E/B, canon pairings. *future lemons*

In most stories I read I hate Mike Newton. That's really funny because in the movie I really liked Mike Newton and in the actual Saga I didn't think he was that bad. More like a little annoying nat, but not scary or mean. In this story you will REALLY HATE Mike Newton. He takes on the role that I usually see James play. He is unreasonably mean and scary. This story is rated M due to the graphic nature of Mike's relationship with Bella. There is a rape scene and if you have ever experienced that, or had someone close to you experience it, you understand the confusion associated with a rape - especially from someone you love. I think snshyne describes that scene tastefully and she explains the confusion that Bella feels beautifully.

In Fate & Forgotten Secrets Bella is so broken. I just don't think she can go through much more. Her story starts out bad and gets worse. I can only see 2 bright spots for her 1) her relationship with Alice. I love the way this author creates the relationship between Bella and Alice. Alice is one of my FAVORITE characters and I really like the strong bond that snshyne has protreyed. and 2) Edward. Now, you know I love me some Edward - I know he is a bright spot for Bella in this story, but Edward seems a little spoiled to me. I am interested to see how he handles things that don't go his way all the time.

This story is compelling, I am really anxious to see what will happen next. It is a long fic - 17 chapters so far and I don't see her slowing down anytime soon. Anytime a new author puts their work out there it is scary for them. I applaud snshyne for having the guts it takes to write a successful story. I follow snshyne on Twitter and she is such a real person to me, I am proud to call her friend. I think you should give her a read and see what you think.

Here is the link to her story: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5331891/1/Fate_Forgotten_Secrets

Here is the link to her blog: http://snshynne.blogspot.com/

snshyne has lots of stuff on her profile page associated with Fate & Forgotten Secrets, don't forget to check that stuff out. She has lots of pictures of clothing. I think snshyne may be a girl after Alice's heart.

And you should follow her on Twitter, 'cause you will really like her: http://twitter.com/snshyne Twitter does come with a warning though - we get a little potty-mouthed sometimes and sometimes there might be porn. LOL!