Let's see how these two remarkably talented girls describe their story shall we... Edward and Bella meet one cloudy May morning at their neighborhood coffee bar. Little do they know that they have actually been conversing for several months under assumed names. Collaboration between CPW and FLB11. M for language and lemony goodness. **I want to give credit to Flghtlessbird11 for the picture to the right - it is beautiful!*** The link at the bottom of the review goes to coldplaywhore's profile and not Flightlessbird11's but they both are equally responsible for this wonderful story. *
I just need you to know that I love this story. I read it all the way through in about 2 days and I couldn't stop to even read my normal updates. That is how good. This is NOT one with LOTS AND LOTS of copious sex in it. It has lemons - yes - and UST - yes - but it also has a remarkable story that is suspenseful. Not that it's a mystery - but Bella and Edward are already online friends and they already have feelings for each other when they meet in real life, but they don't KNOW they are meeting their online friend. In person, she just considers him "Hot Coffee Guy" and Edward considers her "Sexy Coffee Girl" because they are lusting after each other from afar.
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So here we have it - They know each other online and are each other's confidant. They see each other in the coffee house and basically drool over each other. Then they actually meet each other. You would think that they would be quick to put all the pieces together. Not Bella and Edward - these two can't do ANYTHING the easy way. I have to say that I really want to SMACK Bella a couple times in this story. But that makes it better when you feel passionately about what is happening. Coldplaywhore and Flightlessbird11 actually made me talk out loud to my screen a couple times. That is a FIRST. I have cried, and laughed, and looked around for my husband a couple times - but I have NEVER talked to the screen - until now. I just want to reach my hand in there and show them what's going on. But I guess that's part of the fun.
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I find Coldplaywhore and Flightlessbird11 to be very easy to read. I have read a bunch of coldplaywhore's stuff. Her stories are always compelling and they always leave you wanting more. Maybe I'm Falling for You is really making me want updates, even though I just finished it. I really want to know HOW everything will work out and WHEN. All of our favorite characters are in this story so you will get plenty of Alice, Jasper, Rosie and Emmett - but by far this story is B/E. My favorite character is Margaret (the coffee house lady). If I was in this story, I would be Margaret - because she knows ALL. If I were in Twilight, I would be Mrs. Cope. I love those characters that keep the story going. And this story has one. This story is Great because it is not just lemon after lemon after lemon - it feels true to life and you get to know and love each one of the characters.
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If you are looking for a really good story to sink your teeth into, I suggest you give Maybe I'm Falling for You a chance. I am sure that you will love it as much as I do!
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Here is the link to the story: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5343966/1/Maybe_Im_Falling_For_You
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Here is the ling to Coldplaywhore's blog. I think you will really enjoy it. She posts teasers and she reviews stories and she is really great. Check it out! http://coldplaywhore.blogspot.com/
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I also follow coldplaywhore on twitter - she is GREAT: http://twitter.com/coldplaywhore
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Thank you for taking the time to read my review - don't forget to leave me a comment and let me know if you are reading this one! Love You!
12 comments:
Le Sigh! I adore MIFFY!... every time I read it I have a big daft dopey grin on my face. Its perfect in its sweetness and has me snorting with laughter at times.
Everyone should read this!!
Yes, this is a collaboration with Flightlessbird11, one of my ff besties! and I adore her, so let's admit that outright :) Thanks so much for the review, I love you all the more for it. Perhaps we should get a new chapter out to you guys. Blame the beta, she has it :)
Hey there! I've been sent by CPW to set you straight LOL. I do in fact co-write MIFFY with coldplaywhore. The story was my original idea, and since she is my beta, we began brainstorming together and eventually decided to co-write.
Thanks for the awesome review and even giving me credit when you weren't sure I even wrote it :)
<3 Flightlessbird11
Hey guys - I removed the first paragraph due to the comments from coldplaywhore and flightlessbird11. I originally questioned whether Flightlessbird11 was actually writing the story with coldplaywhore - I shouldn't have questioned. She IS!! So that's where their comments are coming from. Love you girls - sorry if I misunderstood. I really enjoyed the story! Thanks for taking the time to correct my review. I would never want to give the wrong impression.
I love this story =) makes me smile every time i read it
Thanks for the love though bb! :) Much appreciated!
I love this fic!!! :)
Edward, Bella, coffee, and computers. I'm in. Sign me up. I think this will be my next ff to start once one I am reading is completed. Gotta follow my rules. ;o)
Another one to add to my list! School is really cramping my fanfiction reading...lol
sold!
i will start reading!
Wow! I hadnt heard of this one! THanks! Adding to list.. damn list is growing faster than I can control it....;)
Another one to add to the list. LOL! You really know how to feed my addiction. Love the idea of the story.
BTW... that drawing is amazing.
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