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Wednesday, March 24, 2010

We Don't Break, We Bend by lyricalkris

This review was written by the Beautiful (and Angst Lovin') Snshyne

We Don't Break, We Bend by lyricalkris

Original Author's Description: Even in the darkest times, you might find the kind of love that saves you. Rated M for dark themes.


This fic comes rec'd to me many, many moons ago by the deliciously delightful lambcullen. So, go thank her when you get a moment. I've been reading We Don't Break, We Bend almost from when it started posting. I've been waiting to review it because of the nature of the dark themes, I wanted to be able to give a thorough opinion to you faithful readers of SFFR.

In school, there is always the one kid who wears long sleeves and heavy jeans all the time. Even in the sweltering heat of Summer. The one kid who might unexpectedly go absent for a few days and never invites kids over to play. All so no one will have to know what they suffer through at home. In this fic, there are three: Jasper, Bella and Edward. And all they have is each other.

There's the reality of life that people get into foster care just for the money and not for the kids. And the bully who picks on those who seem weaker than him. James Whitlock is just that kind of guy. A shady and malevolent character wrapped in a towering inferno with a heavy hand, he emotionally battered his already damaged high school girlfriend and then left her once his son Jasper came into the world and took his place on the ladder of importance. Jasper's mother later dies in a car accident leaving him to go and live with his less than reputable father.

Jasper is with James for a couple of years bent to the point of almost breaking when James becomes the foster parent for Edward and Bella. Edward and Bella are already familiar with each other and had already developed a relationship from spending time in the system together, but I'm not telling you how they got there. And although they didn't openly trust Jasper at first, the three of them came to bond over their similar experiences and shared situation. They cling to one another because they only trust each other. James becomes more violent and soon other issues like drug use and attempts at sexual assault come into play. The kids are not in a safe environment at all. However, on the strength of each other, they keep a shred of their sanity in tact.

Enter the Cullens, a sense of normalcy in their chaotic world. Befriended by Alice, the trio spend time at the Cullens house and find that they are adored and cherished, which is hard to process. A small shred of faith in humanity starts to bud within the three mistreated children as they start to look forward to the time they spend in the beautiful big house with the happy family, video games and meals they don't have to fend for themselves. Life isn't all peachy though as they still have to go back to James' house when the more relaxed times are over and fight for their lives.

There's light at the end of the tunnel because we all know how caring, compassionate, and insightful Carlisle and Esme are. LyricalKris does a nice job bringing their subtle natures to the forefront at the height of the drama in the lives of Jasper, Edward and Bella. Being there just when the kids need them the most. Really, harsh issues aside, this story is about three kids who are "legs of a tripod- holding themselves up straight and tall - but if one of them broke then surely they would all fall." It would still be that story without the abuse, negligence, and fear. At the core, it's about friendship, love, trust and survival.

Sadly, with just over 200 reviews, this story is a little known Treasure. Tragic really because LyricalKris does a good job keeping the balance of the dark themes realistic while not being overly done for shock value. We Don't Break, We Bend is nearly complete so if you start now, you won't have to wait long to get to the other side of the mountain so to speak.

Story Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5508413/1/

Twitter: http://twitter.com/lyricalkris

So, What did you think?  Are you reading this story?  I love it when people pull together for each other!  PLEASE leave a comment and let us know you were here and let us know what you are reading right now!!!  Thank you for reading Southern Fan Fiction Review!!!

11 comments:

  1. Thank you for the rec. I'll definitely read it.
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  2. Ok, I will be starting this one soon!
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  3. This story is tremendously depressing and heartbreaking, but wonderfully written. The characters are strong and you can really relate to their pain. Unfortunately, you will find out that the author has made it very believable as she has lived through very similar situations. I praise her for writing this and hope that this was a cathartic experience for her. I'm so glad I was rec'd this story awhile back and would definitely recommend reading it. It is very realistic and beautifully done.
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  4. Kris is such a lovely lady! Sadly, I haven't had the chance to read her stuffs, but I'm on a wild goose chase for an awesome fic, so she can count on my blabbery in the very near future. MWAH!
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  5. will read for sure. thanks for the rec
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  6. Thumbs up for one of my favorite fics.

    <3
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  7. If Kris wasn't my longdistance lover I would still love this story! I must admit I am a bit of a wuss, and Kris can write some very emo stuff. She brings on the tears big time in Alice's Jasper Edwrad's Bella, so I knew from the beginning that We don't break would be the same..... but I couldnt get out of reading it since I technically forced her into posting.

    I have however had her hold my hand threw the rougher parts though, she's been kind enough to read some of the harsher stuff to me during our late night phone calls.

    I can honetsly say that while reading the story can feel like a punch in the gutt hearing her speak the words aloud shows how truly effected she is by them. She is not some writer who gets a sick pleasure from torturing their characters. Every hit, every broken bone was hard for her.

    She worried constantly about each chapter, but knew that she couldn't sugarcoat how the real is, and so therefore would not sugarcoat her story.

    I wish I could say it was just this story that's underappreciated, but honestly it's not the story that needs more readers, it's Kris hereself. She is a brillant writer that seems to be hidden in the background simply because she keeps her stories short and realistic.

    Don't let the numbers of chapters fool you though. Kris knows how to tell a well rounded story and you will find yourself connecting to each and every character.

    So yes I will agree that We don't break we bend is an amazing story, but I won't say if you havent read it you should, instead I will say you need to sure you take the time to read each of Lyricalkris's stories.
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  8. I love your recs...I'll be adding this one too!
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  9. This sounds really good, and dark.
    It's on my 'TO-READ' list.
    thanks!
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  10. Oh mai. Just. Bwah. Eloquence fails. Thank you. You can't imagine, with this particular story, what everyone's support means to me. Cella is right. There was nothing I did in this story that I didn't agonize over - so when I get reviews it's just...I don't even know how to describe.

    @buzzkill, @valerie @anonymous @KD @gossip_bangkok - Thanks for your interest. I hope you're not disappointed if you wander on over.

    @D_pattinson Thank you so much for your kind words. It has been amazingly cathartic...and what I think is an end to a 10 year journey.

    @angstgoddess003 Actually, you've read at least one chapter of mine. Hehe. I wrote Jack and Sally for the gift exchange and I know you read the first chapter at least hehe. Thanks bb. :) Lookin' forward to it. Frealz.

    @Jadedandboring I love you. I know you know this but it bears repeating.

    @Cella Are you TRYING to make me cry?!?! You know I'd marry you if it was legal...and if there wasn't the whole you already being married thing to contend with.

    Thanks Sunshyne. Really. :)
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  11. OMG!
    Thanks so much for recommending this!
    As always you lead me to the best of the best!
    AWESOME!
    xoxo
    -B-
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