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Tuesday, September 28, 2010

Big Sky By WordNinja

Here at SFFR, we love readers who are passionate about fic. So when Holly1980 approached us about a guest review, her passion for Big Sky blew us away and we were more than happy to invite her to our table for some fun ficin’. Read on, and let her tell you about why she thinks Big Sky by WordNinja is goodfic.

First, I’d like to start off by thanking the wonderful ladies at Southern FanFictioN Review for allowing me to be a guest reviewer. Now, let’s talk shop. I’m choosing to review the beautiful story, Big Sky, by the equally beautiful, WordNinja. Let’s see how she describes her story.




Big Sky by WordNinja

Life in Big Sky Montana is hard. When Bella is suddenly left with a failing ranch, she's determined to make it on her own. But when arrogant, gorgeous Edward Cullen offers the help she needs, she has to decide; is saving her ranch worth losing herself? Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 10 - Words: 60,966 - Reviews: 319 - Updated: 8-1-10 - Published: 1-25-10 - Bella & Edward

This is how Holly describes Big Sky. Edward, shirtless, in a Stetson hat.

Enough said. Thanks for reading and don’t forget to tip yo waitress in the form of a review. LOL, just kidding. Okay, maybe not, but it got your attention didn’t it?

Before I go into my take on Big Sky, I need to first tell you how I came across this little gem. Several months ago, I was watching Lifetime. Why? Because nothing else was on TV and it was a Sunday afternoon. The movie was about these three sisters who were living and working at their families ranch in Montana. I kept thinking, this would make a good fic. It’s a sickness really. Everything I see, I wonder immediately how can I turn this into fan fic.

I put the idea out of my head and carried on. It was only a short time later that I saw Bookjunkie1975, who happens to be WordNinja’s beta, tweet a link to a story. Being the compulsive link clicker that I am (you never know what kind of good RobPorn you might find) I clicked on it and low and behold, it was Big Sky! It was like the fic God’s looked down upon me and graced me with exactly what I was looking for. Besides, I’ve since learned that when Bookiejunkie1975 rec’s something, it’s nine times out of ten, a good read. She gives good reci’s.

After a devastating car accident, which leaves Bella’s parents dead, she takes on the sole responsibility to save their ranch from crumbling. The Cullen’s own the ranch next door and have been family to Bella since she was little. Alice is her best friend and Edward has always been that boy. You know the one. Good looking, popular, never giving a second glance to the girl next door - literally.

There’s a mysterious aura about Edward in this story. He left Montana for college and, as the story begins, had only just returned to his families ranch. In the second chapter, WordNinja tells about an event occurring between Edward and Jasper, his college roommate and now horse trainer for the Cullens.

“But eventually Wade and his bottom-feeding associates had crossed lines Edward hadn't dreamed of. He bitterly recalled the night he and Jasper had escaped with their lives. Barely. Edward could hardly remember the minutes after, when they had packed their meager belongings into Jasper's truck. It was a haze in his mind, and he was thankful for it. The moments preceding it were horribly clear.

Towing Edward's car behind them they had driven through the night and the entire next day. They hadn't spoken much, each of them dealing with what they'd seen in their own silent way. And silently agreeing not to talk about it again.”

Like I said, it’s mysterious.

The sexual tension is palpable between Edward and Bella. She’s attracted to him and him to her. But in typical canon Edward fashion, and as WordNinja so eloquently says, “That's Edward; cold one second, hot the next, and no warning in between to prepare for the next shock.”

The way WordNinja describes Montana is breathtaking. On her author profile she is up front with the fact that she has never been to Montana. Neither have I, but from her writing, I see it all so clearly. I’m able to draw my own conclusions about the setting, while listening to her describe the wide openness of the big Montana sky.

WordNinja herself, is one of the most gracious writers I’ve had the honor to “meet”. When I found her story, I began stalking- er, I mean, following her- on Twitter. She is one of the few authors that had fun with me while I was reading. I'd leave her a review and then fangirl on Twitter about her. She’d make random tweets wondering what I would think about the next chapter.

All in all, I’d say that if you’re not reading Big Sky, then I suggest you dust off your boots and put on some Dan Seals and Marie Osmond, and Meet Me in Montana.

@WordNinja_Ali twitter link- http://twitter.com/wordninja_ali

@Hollister_1980 twitter link-
http://twitter.com/Hollister_1980

Big Sky link-
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5694637/1/Big_Sky
On a side note, when I (snshyne) was discussing with Holly about her guest review, I had just come home from Minnesota and really, really wanted to read a
Ranchward. Then, she told me she was reviewing Big Sky, I looked it up and gasped at the setting. Fate? Yes, I believe so. I haven't read this one yet, but I'm going to and I hope you will give it a try as well. Thank you for taking the journey to Southern Fan Fiction Review Today!

Saturday, September 25, 2010

Fire and Ice by AncoraImparo83

This review is written by the Lemon Lovin' Ssherrill115

Fire and Ice by AncoraImparo83

Let's see how the author describes this story: A/U All human.Edward is a cold career Doctor who's personal life is non existent. Bella is the fun and flighty new attending who turns his world upside down. Edward struggles with accepting change...can he? Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 20 - Words: 116,662 - Reviews: 508 - Updated: 9-19-10 - Published: 1-18-10 - Edward & Bella


Hey Y'all, have you missed me?? Snshyne and I took an unscheduled break. Actually she took a break and I pouted because I missed her for a couple of weeks. But I think we are back in full force now and I have missed the shit out of you! While I was gone I did a bit of reading which is good news for you because look what I found - Fire and Ice by AncoraImparo83. AncoraImparo is writing another story for me called Twisturbia and if you are not reading it **shakes finger** shame on you! But this review isn't about that story. This review is about Fire and Ice.

All of you know know how much I like AssholeWard. So when the updates were slow, I decided to read the description for Fire and Ice and it sounds a lot like there will be an AssholeWard included in the story. If you like him as much as I do, you won't be disappointed. In fact, at one point I wanted to pop Edward in the Mouth while reading this story. But I didn't, and he has gotten a lot better since then.

This story is about Dr.Edward Cullen who is Head of Cardiology at Lenox Hill Hospital in NY. He works hard - too hard - and he has been in a mindless, loveless relationship with Tanya (the skank). Tanya is a super model who is as fake as WWF Wrestling. Edward throws himself into his job, he plays by the rules and he expects everyone around him to work as hard as he does. He is tough, arrogant and basically (as Bella once calls him) a Douche Bag.

Bella has just been hired on as Head of the Neonatal Department at Lenox Hill. She is sweet, compassionate and one hell of a surgeon. Bella has a teenage daughter who lives with her. She went to medical school with Emmett Cullen who is Chief Resident at Lenox Hill and suggested her for her new job. She has never met Edward. Her best friend Jasper lives in the same building she is moving into and he is a History Teacher. Bella's first day on the job starts out when her neighbor steals her cab that she is waiting for to take her to the hospital. Little did she realize, she had just crossed paths with the infamous Dr.Edward Cullen himself.

Have you ever watched Gray's Anatomy? Well, if you watched it in it's first and second season (when everyone loved it and couldn't WAIT for it to come on) you have pretty much experienced Fire and Ice. AncoraImparo83 is an Amazing Author!! This story will keep you on the edge of your seat loving every single second. I just happen to know that AncoraImparo83 is an intern in a hospital herself and that is why she is so good at the medical jargon in this story. It is so real! People die in this story (not the core people silly - the people in the hospital) there are real life and death struggles going on and through it all you get to feel the TENSION between Sweet fun loving Bella and her Not so fun loving neighbor Edward.

The UST is Delicious but not near as delicious as the actual Lemons! Will there be lemons - oh, yes there will!!! In Fire and Ice you get to not only follow the story of Bella and Edward but you will also get to experience Emmett and Plastic Surgeon Rosalie go at it. Edward and Emmett's sister Alice (the Fashionista) and History Teacher Jasper somehow meet as well. And don't forget Bella's teenage daughter!!! She gets to have a little case of puppy love herself. So Fire and Ice is not all about the hospital life and death - it's about real life and love as well.

I love this story. And I love Ancoraimparo83 too! I think her pen name is really interresting, so I asked her about it. She tells me that it means: "still i am learning" or yet learned in Italian and she has a tattoo of that just like her Dad did. I thought that was pretty cool. I hope you will give Fire and Ice a read. I can promise you that you won't be dissapointed.

Here is the link to her story: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5677071/1/Fire_and_Ice

You can follow her on Twitter Here: http://twitter.com/Aimparomd She is a lot of fun to follow BTW.

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Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Beautiful Nightmare by Simone and Marie

This review was written by your favorite lover of the Angst (and mine) none other than the fabulous Snshyne!!!

I’m back! Did you miss me? Because I certainly missed you! Today, I want to share with you a fic that I get so excited to read, Beautiful Nightmare by Simone and Marie. Let’s see what the author’s have to say about it:

Author Summary: It took only one night, one action, for Jasper's world to be shattered. Will Edward and Co be able to pick up the pieces or will newcomer Alice be the one to stop the nightmares? Not your average fairytale. Jasper/Alice A/H Some non canon couples
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 14 - Words: 112,619 - Reviews: 274 - Updated: 9-16-10 - Published: 4-19-10 - Jasper & Alice

As for me...

I love Jasper. Sadly, I've had an issue where I just can't get into most Jasper fics. For one, non-canon is a hard limit for me; especially main character non-canon. So I have to pass on Jasper/Bella pairings and Edward/Jasper slash, which wipes out about 70% of Jasper fic I've come across. Second, Jasper is often portrayed as a one dimensional character, where he is anything but. He goes far past a highly in-tune human with a love for The Civil War. Third, and I think this is done totally subconcsiously on the part of author’s, but he often ends up playing the part of second fiddle to Edward; even in fics that are supposed to be about him!

Hello Beautiful Nightmare, the cure to my Jasper fic woes.

Although, this fic is classified as Jasper/Alice, up to this point, it's very much just Jasper. Alice is in it, as is Edward, Emmett and several other characters and they all play pivotal roles, but it's Jasper at the focal point. A very real Jasper who has suffered a huge trauma and is barely keeping it together.

I'm not a kid person, this is a widely known fact, however, I absolutely love that what keeps Jasper in tact is the love of and for his son, CJ, and not some miraculous new love that spurns from the ashes of his life. I'm sure anyone with kids can understand that parent-child love that just transcends everything else and will get how powerful that love is. For me, the fact that a good deal of focus is on that love and not romantic feelings that can fall away, is something that sets this fic apart from so many others.

If you’re looking for a typical “daddy” fic, this isn’t it. Dadsper isn’t using the cuteness of his kid to attract ladies (leave that to Edward) and “the girl” isn’t attracted to his son first and then warms up to Jasper and always choosing to stay with Jasper for the sake of the kid. This is very much about a father trying to reconcile what he thought to be true, with the reality he is facing and the truth he uncovers, while doing his best to maintain the strength that single-parent fatherhood requires.

Jasper and CJ don’t live in a bubble. This fic is very much about self-resolve, but also about relationships. About old ones, new ones and those that never falter. Jasper has the support of his family and friends who were there before the tragedy and who will remain after, because they love him. They are that kind of close-knit group that one chooses and creates rather than is forced into, making it all that much more substantial. They see him being an utter, fucking mess, but they won’t let him wallow in it and still give him the space he needs to grieve. Then, there are the new relationships. Someone once told me that fate will bring those people into your life that you need now, but maybe didn’t need or have space for years before. This concept plays out in Beautiful Nightmare perfectly as Jasper moves from destitution towards recovery with help from a source he never saw coming.

Beautiful Nightmare is like a seven-layer dip in an opaque CorningWare dish. Just when you think you’ve eaten one layer, your chip digs deeper into a new layer that you never knew existed. Mystery after mystery unfolds as the story progresses, and it would all be so much easier on Jasper if the one person who could answer was around to solve them. As we know, life ain’t that peachy.

My absolute favorite thing about Beautiful Nightmare is that Jasper feels. So often, he’s the rational voice of reason, or just a pillar of observation, but rarely do we see him get to express what he thinks and feels; and certainly not those raw emotions we all try to hide from others. In this fic, for me, when Jasper feels, hurts, reacts, it’s like watching the Richter scale register an earthquake. Sometimes, it’s a tremor and you might shake a little, but you’re alright. Then there are those pesky aftershocks that get you even though you think it’s all over. But, there is also that level 8 on the Richter scale that happens about once a year that levels buildings and leaves huge cracks in the foundation. As scary as they are to actually go through, there is a sense of beauty to them. Beauty in the destruction, and that’s Jasper in Beautiful Nightmare.

Simon and Marie -
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1933239/Simone_and_Marie

Go step out of your box and try a fic that’s not about Edward. You’ll be drawn in just as much as I am! Thank you for coming by Southern Fan Fiction Review today, see you next time!
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Saturday, September 18, 2010

Interview between the-glory-days and cevuplay

Cali, an SFFR reader, submitted a request to have an author-to-author interview between the-glory-days, author of such awesomeness as Alphabet Weekends and Life in Technicolor and cevuplay, who writes the incredible Superman Complex, which has been featured on SFFR. These two ladies were lovely to agree and I'll shut up now, because this interview is great! Enjoy!

From opposite sides of the country, two writers met and began a friendship that knew no bounds! With different time zones and three thousand miles, the two writers quickly realized that paper cups and a spool of string would not suffice as a means to communicate. Carrier pigeons were inefficient and a major time-suck, usually getting lost somewhere in Kansas and since owls only delivered post in Harry Potter’s world, the Internet, they decided, would have to work.

…..And now, onto the interview

cevuplay: I'm not quite sure how to really use wave, I never really took the time to learn..... haha. It will be an adventure. lol

the-glory-days: lol It's all good. Yeah. An adventure that readers can follow. :-) So where to begin. I guess we should start from the beginning.

cevuplay: That sounds so biblical.... What was Cali's question again? How did we meet and sustain a friendship from across the country?
the-glory-days: Cali asked, "You live a country apart, how did your friendship start & grow?"

cevuplay: Shheeeh. That was what, 2006? On Livejournal

the-glory-days: May 2007. We had both commented and read each others MCR slash stories and friended each other on LJ, but one day you made a post about your brother going off to the Army.

cevuplay: That's right! It was 2007! I wish we were friends longer than that I guess. hahaha. And you were so awesome commenting on that post about my brother. That's rightt!!!

the-glory-days: And then I went through a really nasty break-up a few weeks later and you asked for my IM SN, and we began talking everyday after that. :-) I also like to think I had a part in you reading Twilight. Sorry. ;-)

cevuplay: Oh god. Yeah. That's right. And now Twilight is my only fandom. Aww. Ok so now, how do we sustain that relationship right? Or how did it "grow"....
……. also; you're forgiven for getting me into Twifandom


the-glory-days: Oh yeah. What the hell did I make you read? I think it was Healing by freakyhazeleyes? Yes?

cevuplay: YES! (I can't type at All!!!) And then you gave me the Barflies and Boys or whatever fic that was. And thennnnnn Harry Potter fiction. lol

the-glory-days: lol You still haven't read Finding Himself. I've been trying to make you read since 2008. GET WITH IT WOMAN! It's my Potter canon.
cevuplay: NOOOOOOOO. I will get to it sometime. I promise

the-glory-days: lol So, how did we maintain our friendship? I guess through chatting online which later led to actual letters. Lol Remember our campaign to bring letter writing back?

cevuplay: Remember when I sent you Felis on your Christmas present?

the-glory-days: Oh yeah. lol Desecrating the Spanish language. Shame on you.

cevuplay: Did your mom laugh at me ?

the-glory-days: I'm pretty sure she did. She asked, "Why did Chelci (that's how she pronounces it, spell Feliz wrong?)

cevuplay: We should start letter writing again. That was fun. I
still have yours. They’re in a scrapbook.


the-glory-days: I have yours in a shoebox. You have the nicest stationery sets … So from comments on LJ, to IM'ing, to letter writing, to text messaging and then I FINALLY flew out to Cali in Summer ‘09. And I dragged you to Comic Con so I could drool over David Tennant. I couldn’t stop smiling; it was ridiculous.

cevuplay: CALIFORNIA!!!!!! Best summer everrr! Oh god, you fangirled so hard over Tennant. It was awesome. I got super burnt at Sea World. And we got to see elephants and bears and koalas at the zoo.
the-glory-days: yeah and before that was Disney, which I had never been to and San Francisco. Longest drive ever! God, I miss SF. God, it was awesome. We got some awesome cheese at the market. Oh, and that's where I got the idea for Life in Technicolor. It was so grey outside, it looked Black & white.

cevuplay: California is pretty awesome. You should come back already. hahaha.

the-glory-days: I hope to during Christmas. I've already started saving. :-)

cevuplay: YES! I'm excited about that. Ok, so onto Interview questions?

the-glory-days: lol talking about sidetracking. lol

cevuplay: AHEM; are you in the Twicloset? What the eff does that mean??

the-glory-days: Where did that question come from for starters? And I think it means, do any of your friends know you read Twilight. Participate in the fandom.

cevuplay: The FAQ's snshyne sent us

the-glory-days: And lord NO!! I mean, I've expressed that I've read the books, and I've dragged my friends to see the movies, but they have no idea how invested I am in it. I'm the Sc-Fi loving, comic-book reading über dork. They would be SHOCKED!

cevuplay: Ohh!! Everyone knows I read the books and the movies are faves of mine, but yeah, no one knows how invested I am. Fanfic wise. haha
the-glory-days: No one I know, knows that I write fanfic. Hell my friend, D, always criticizes people who write fanfic. So I keep my mouth shut and nod my head.

cevuplay: Fanfic has such a bad connotation man. I don’t think anyone knows I write it.

the-glory-days: It does and that sucks, but there are some truly talented writers out there that are just trying to hone their skills and FF provides a great outlet for that.

cevuplay: Oh, for sure. YOU. You're an amazing writer. and I agree, FF does give you that outlet.

the-glory-days: Oh please. You're far better than I am. But that's why I got into FF. I want to improve my story telling ability and progress my writing to where it's ready for publishers to marvel at it. lol

cevuplay: Um, hello, have you even read Alphabet Weekends? That shit is legendary.

the-glory-days: For a minute I thought you were gonna pull a Barney and go LEGEN-wait for it, I hope your not lactose intolerant because the next part is DARY.

cevuplay: lmao. omg. you just went there... lol

the-glory-days: You must respect the NPH. It's a COMMANDMENT! lol

cevuplay: I love NPH, no question. Speaking of NPH, my next interview question is; do you watch glee! (i know you do!) and if so, who is your favorite guest star and lead character?
the-glory-days: Favorite guest star was Kristin Chenoweth. Favorite lead, I like Finn, though he's not the best singer, but you've watched those videos I’ve emailed you. lol I love me a funny man.

cevuplay: boooo. I love me some Cory too. he's great. My favorite guest is Idina Menzel and my favorite character is Brittany.

the-glory-days: lmao Brittany. She's classic.

cevuplay: I think my cat's reading my diary...

the-glory-days: I was just going to write that.

cevuplay: because we’re ~twins

the-glory-days: lol So true. Let's see what’s a good question I can ask: Do you remember the first FANFIC you ever read?

cevuplay: In any fandom? shoot It was Gerard/Frank for My Chemical Romance, where Gerard is sent to his family relatives house? And he meets Frank and dances with him at a party? Come to find out it was only a coma dream? Do you know which one I'm talking about?

the-glory-days: I’m shit at remembering names and authors, fyi. Beats the hell out of me. First FF I ever read was a Harry/Hermoine chaptered fic on some HP site. Lol

cevuplay: lol
the-glory-days: So, though I know this answer: When did you discover Twilight?

cevuplay: When you told me to.

the-glory-days: It was my roommate's fault. She badgered me into reading. And then I had to wait for Eclipse to come out. I told you a few months before shooting on the movie started.

cevuplay: yeppp. And I didn't read it until BD came out. I'm still on the fence about BD.

the-glory-days: I've come to the conclusion that everything after the bed breaking and pillow biting that the story ended. Renesme who?

cevuplay: lol! Which brings me to my next unoriginal question (off the FAQ's) Who do you see as your characters?

the-glory-days: I think my Edward would be a combination of Jackson and Fernando Torres. :-) My Bella is a mix of Ellen Page and Kristen. They have similar traits and both fit well into the Bella mold. Everyone else is pretty solid. Though I think Nikki would have made a great Leah.

cevuplay: Yum, Jackson.

the-glory-days: Let's not go there because this entire conversation will head toward a completely X-rated direction.

cevuplay: guess who's seeing him Friday?
the-glory-days: This is me giving you the finger. __

cevuplay: lol, perpendicular sign?

the-glory-days: Shut up. Also, my new drug of choice is Cherry Coke Zero.

cevuplay: cherry coke zero? hmm. must try. i'm addicted to Starbucks.

the-glory-days: I know. You dragged me to the SB on the day we drove to Comic Con, though I think it had more to do with the barista. lol

cevuplay: zackkkkkkkkkkkk

the-glory-days: Does he still work there? He was cool and he and I both like Anti-Flag.

cevuplay: oh yes. he's so hot. and he's my fave

the-glory-days: He's definitely cute.

cevuplay: ok back on topic here. We’re deffff off track.

the-glory-days: One thing you can't live without? And I got that straight off the FAQ sheet!

cevuplay: crackberry, you?
the-glory-days: I still can't believe you got rid of your Sidekick. You were in love with it for years.

cevuplay: I sometimes miss my sidekick/ but mostly love my blackberry, Herbert, more

the-glory-days: I can't live without my iPod. Music is my solace. I need it. I crave it all the time. Your laptop was Humphrey?

cevuplay: Humphrey was the laptop, Herbert is the blackberry, Alfred is the ipod, Gregory is the car.
I name everything!


the-glory-days: I remember. Except for the cat. lol

cevuplay: poor fluffy toes. he doesn't even know his name.

the-glory-days: What the hell was his name?

cevuplay: Undecided. Do you write professionally? Do you aspire to? (From the FAQs)

the-glory-days: I've written for my school newspaper, but I haven't gotten anything major published, nor have I tried. I want to truly feel like what I'm handing out to publishing houses is fantastic, and I don't feel that way yet, maybe in the years to come.
cevuplay: Yeah, I feel like my prose writing can still use a lot of work. I find myself going through old pieces and finding plot holes and character changes, and the resolutions are always too rushed. Right now, I find that writing poetry leaves me without those feelings of being incomplete. And poetry is easier to get my emotions out. I've had one thing published (just freaking yesterday) and I love it. I don't think I could have sent my work in without loving it whole-heartedly.

the-glory-days: Ditto. That's why I think FF is a great way to work on that, especially since you can get feedback from readers immediately.
Exactly, I want to love my work and really feel like it’s worthy of being published.

cevuplay: Any piercings or tattoos? It’s funny, asking these questions, because I already know the answers. lol

the-glory-days: lol Seriously. I have several piercings. Three in each lobe, cartilage on the right, corkscrew industrial on the left, nose screw on my right nostril, (used to be a hoop-man I miss the hoop- Damn you Corporate America!), and I have two other things pierced. lol ;-) When I was in high school, I also had the right side of my lip pierced with an awesome black hoop.

cevuplay: I have three tattoos and four piercings. My piercings are pretty tame. I have the left side of my bottom lip pierced, which I currently have a stud in, although my hoop is my bff also. I have my ears pierced, and on my right ear, I have a stud in the middle of my ear, right before the cartilage.
My tattoos are pretty spaced out, one on my left shoulder of the LOVE sign, with the LO over the VE. I have a peace sign on the back of the right side of my neck, behind my ear, and I have Flower from Bambi tattooed on my left forearm.

the-glory-days: I remember you used to have a Monroe and at one point you had snake bites? Yes? I love your tats. Simple, clean, and pretty
cevuplay: I did have snake bites, and the Monroe all at the same time. haha. My sister called me "Edward Scissor Lips"

the-glory-days: haha lol. Besides me, have you met any fandom people? Twi fandom, cause I know you've met MCR.

cevuplay: I don't think I have, although two of the girls I follow on Twitter live in my area. But no, besides you, I don't think so.
You have though, right?


the-glory-days: Yeah, I had the pleasure of dining on several occasions with WriteonTime, littlesecret84, TallulahBelle, ciaobella27, & spanglemaker9. The first time we were supposed to meet, I almost didn't go. I legitimately had a ton of crap to do for class, but you know, I'm terribly shy around new people, but I'm glad I went. They are some genuinely lovely women.

cevuplay: :] How do you handle negative reviews and comments?

the-glory-days: Most of the negative comments I receive are legitimate criticism and I take that into account when I write other things. However, some criticism hurts, I'm not gonna lie, because some people in any fandom are really negative. It's the power the Internet provides, but I keep a word document with all the negative comments and I refer to them when I'm writing a new story or chapter to see where I can improve, be it my sentence structuring or the way I present a situation and so forth.

cevuplay: I don't keep any documents, but I've been relatively lucky in the respect that most of the reviews I get are positive. I know I don't keep a set posting timeline, and that's generally what my negative comments/reviews/PMs are about, and while I do take them into account, I can't really do anything about it right now.
Which brings me to my next question: what do you use to write on (laptop/iPod/etc) and where do you typically like to write?

the-glory-days: My laptop is generally where I write and mostly at home, but I find myself writing while I'm at work a lot of times. Sometimes I get inspiration on the 5-train home and I'll write on the DocumentsToGo app on my phone or iPod, depending on which has more battery to waste at the moment. :-) you?

cevuplay: Right now, I'm back to the good ol' pen and paper, which kind of works in my favor, because when I do get to type it all out, it's like an editing process, I can add or delete words while I go. I plan on getting a Macbook, (hopefully soon - but we all know - or should know- that I suck at saving money) If I get inspiration; I sometimes write quotes, lyrics, and thoughts into my notepad app on my blackberry, and then go back to it later. because I'm on the computer all day for work (without any real internet access) I like to sit with my spirals and write, it's mostly just poetry lately, and SC sometimes; as well as a new thing I'm working on with snshyne's help. What’s your favorite Disney movie? I <3>

the-glory-days: I carry a black composition notebook with me at all times to write down quotes I find. That's the great thing about the subway; there are all these famous quotes on the ads along the top of the train. I'm currently on notebook #17 and it's an Umbrella Academy one. It's awesome and says: THIS COMPOSITIONAL WRITING DEVICE BELONGS TO:

the-glory-days: I know you do. My favorite is Aladdin. I love it! The music, the Genie. Coolest thing EVER!

cevuplay: I'm more of a Beauty and the Beast kind of girl, myself. Hah always have been. What fan fics are you reading right now? which author are you most fond of right now?

the-glory-days: I'm actually not reading a story at the moment because I took a mini-break from the fandom to just focus on life and writing. But I'm up for suggestions.

cevuplay: Sweets817, gave me the suggestion of something that was super awesome. It was a TA/Student fic called Weight of Words, it's a WIP, sooo good. I'm also in LOVE with Mac214 (I love Ryeward!) its a WIP to, about Scottish Edward needing a wife to stay in the US., so good. I don't really have any others right now. Anything by Mac214 I've found, I love
the-glory-days: I couldn't get into Weight of Words. I couldn't get into that Edward. I've heard good things about Ryeward.

cevuplay: BK!! Read Ryeward. That's about it for me in the fandom right now. I've got a lot of RL changes coming up, so I've been getting really stressed.

the-glory-days: Oh yeah. When do you move to school?

cevuplay: I have my orientation on Friday, and then a housing orientation on Sept 10. I don't actually start class until Sept 21. Are you going back to school for Fall, or are you taking a semester off?

the-glory-days: wooo *wipes sweat off brow* I just ran down the block and back. lol
I start again on Monday :-(

cevuplay: Why were you running down the block? lol! Also, most of my friends start back Monday too. Not me though, I have another month to go. Woohoo Quarter system!

the-glory-days: Had to track down the UPS guy to hand him something urgent. lol Lucky, though the quarter system is hectic.

cevuplay: Yeah, and I found out that a few of my classes - while transferable - aren't equivalent to the UCR courses. I still have math and science credits i have to take, along with my major courses

the-glory-days: Ouch. That sucks. I don't know what else to write for this interview
cevuplay: ME EITHER! do you have the FAQ sheet? Maybe we can use those?

the-glory-days: If you could give one book to someone what would it be? Why? And to add to that, what ALBUM would you give them?

cevuplay: Book, right now I’d say The Secret Life of Bees by Sue Monk Kidd, because I love that book so much. It’s got a great message and it’s a fun read. Album, I’d give Frank Sinatra’s Greatest Hits album, because there’s a song for every mood on it. Some of them are sad songs about lost love, or a night on the town, or happy love. What about you?

the-glory-days: I added the album thing. Music is a big thing for me and I know for you as well. Lamb by Christopher Moore. I love this book so hard. It's funny, intelligent, and just so clever.
Album probably, The Bends by Radiohead. I can listen to this album from start to finish. I adore it.

cevuplay: I think that’s a good place to end it.

Now that you see how crazy we are; we're utterly off our front porch rockers, I'm sure you're waiting with bated breath for our next projects, right? Well, you, our dear readers, are in luck. The-glory-days and cevuplay are teaming together, capes and face masks, to save the literary day with a collaboration of awesome, seasonal fun. Keep your eyes to the sky for our wouldbe bat signal. When you see it - it will probably look like a coke can with whipped cream and a straw - you'll know that the Christmas Collab is complete.

... Or you could just look out for our story by alerting us, whatever's easier for you.

For now, we say adieu, adios, and aloha, the-glory-days & cevuplay
For your convenience - here are the links to all the stories and authors mentioned in tonight's interview:

Who else feels like they just had a fly on the wall view of a pajama party between cevuplay and the-glory-days? It was great to learn about how their friendship started and has blossomed and some of their writing quirks, like pen and paper...

Leave the authors some love and let us know how you enjoyed it. Thank you for clicking over to SFFR today!

Saturday, September 4, 2010

Sub Plans by SnowWhiteHeart

This review is written by Lemon Lover Ssherrill115


I hope you enjoyed the video as much as I did. Let's read the author's original description of Sub Plans: Bella is a math teacher by day, a strict Domme by night. Edward is a sub looking for someone to punish him for his misdeeds. Probably the only BDSM comedy you will ever read. Probably the only vamp-subward you'll ever meet. Twilight - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 19 - Words: 60,518 - Reviews: 3451 - Updated: 8-31-10 - Published: 4-13-10 - Bella & Edward

Those of you who know me, know that I like my Edward a little on the "forceful" side and I would NEVER want to read him being submissive. So I know you are asking yourself "Why" would she review a story like this. Well, let me explain... Not only is Edward a submissive in this story, he is also a vampire and to tell you the truth, the combination really works. You know how tormented Edward is in Twilight (the books)? This is EXACTLY the formula that makes submissive/vampire Edward tormented in Sub Plans.

If you follow me on Twitter, you know that I have announced a rule that I WILL NOT start any more "incomplete" stories because of a story that has just drug me along TOO LONG without a lemon. So when SnowWhiteHeart suggested I read her story, I didn't want to do it. Then when she told me that Edward is a Submissive, I came right out and TOLD her that I don't read Edward as a Submissive stories. She is so sweet Y'all and she very delicately convinced me to give it a try. BOY AM I GLAD I DID! I love this story. It is sexy, steamy, compelling without being degrading and without showing Edward as Weak. In this story, yes Edward is a Submissive, but really no more than he is in the actual books. He is just REALLY in love with Bella and lives to serve her. The love that he has for her is so precious and she never degrades him as a Domme. She eventually loves him right back!

SnowWhiteHeart is an excellent author, she keeps you engaged in the actual story without worrying about WHEN the story will get to the next lemon. Her story Sub Plans is funny and light hearted while dealing with some serious past issues for Bella. Bella basically has no one in her life and when she meets the Cullens she finally feels complete. I hope Edward will change her - but to tell you the truth, I am not so sure. You will just have to read the story with me to find out. Sub Plans is on Chapter 19 so you have plenty to sink your teeth into before waiting for updates and SnowWhiteHeart has promised me that she will be good about not making us wait too long for them. I suggest you give her a read - I know you will enjoy it as much as I do!!

Here is the link to Sub Plans: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5894804/1/Sub_Plans

And if you are on The Twitter, I suggest you follow her, she is sweet and funny and a joy to follow: https://twitter.com/snowwhitehearts

Thank you for taking the time tonight to read Southern Fan Fiction Review. Ok you know I'm a comment whore - did you like the video? Did you like the review? Do you read Sub Plans? Let me hear from you, show me some LOVE!!

Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Last Tango in Forks by Awesomesauce 76

Southern Fan Fiction Review would like to welcome Indefinable1. She is our guest reviewer tonight. You may know her from her FUCKAWESOME one shot: "Disciplinarian". If you haven't read it - here is the link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6185362/1/Disciplinarian



You can also follow here on Twitter here: https://twitter.com/Indefinable1


Indefinable1 is here tonight to review:


Last Tango in Forks by AwesomeSauce76

Last Tango in Forks written by the awesome - AwesomeSauce76
Story Stats as of 08/24/10 Author’s Description: Bella Swan has spent a lifetime putting everyone else's needs before her own. Could a chance encounter with a mysterious stranger begin to change all of that? AU/AH Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 16 - Words: 94,144 - Reviews: 4568 - Updated: 8-22-10 - Published: 4-23-10 - Bella & Edward

You would think that writing a review for a story that you absolutely love would make the task a lot easier, but you’d be wrong. Knowing that I love this story only makes me more nervous because I’m afraid I won’t do it justice. After all, how do you review a story by an author that has “awesome” in their name?! Plus, since this is my first review, I’m feeling loads of pressure! Yikes!

Now let’s get down to business. As you can see by the story stats, this fic is not complete. This review is written based on the first 16 chapters. I do not know how the author plans to end the story or how many more chapters will be posted; however, I can certainly tell you that the first 16 chapters are well worth the read.


For me, this story makes me ask, “Do I believe in love at first sight?” and “What would I do?” I won’t lie to you here people, even though I’d like to pretend that if I were to ever meet Edward/Rob in real life, that I could remain all composed and mature. But the God’s honest truth is I’d probably attack him with my tongue and then pass out. So I can’t really blame Bella for succumbing to his sexy powers.

In Last Tango in Forks, we find Bella just existing. The only thing Bella knows of love, lust, and passion is what she’s read about in the fictional smut books she’s addicted to. Bella’s life belongs more to those around her than it does to her. She’s expected to be practical, routine, safe, and dependable; and she’s expected to do all of this with an unsatisfied sex life. As with anyone who is kind, generous, and reliable, the people around her often take advantage of her.

When Bella encounters a beautiful stranger in need, he offers her a chance to experience everything she’s been missing in her life. They find themselves in a moment of need, where they both just need to feel. Just something… anything. Just to feel alive again. Her stranger offers her passion, lust, and desire, with no expectations, strings, or requirements. The question is, once you’ve experienced something so wonderful, can you really go back to something you never loved to begin with? How long can Bella continue to live the lie that is her “real life”, when all she longs for is another chance to enjoy her beautiful stranger?

And how long will fate let them continue with this precarious dance before it decides to intervene? Last Tango in Forks is full of passion and lust. We experience every physical desire through both Bella and Edward’s POV. This fic is rated M for a reason. The lemons are so very juicy and so far there has been nothing that is too taboo for these two lovers to try. When I read this fic it even has me shouting, “Oh, God, Yes!” It is both well written and well paced.

And with that, I bid you a buttery ado – and declare that both Last Tango in Forks and AwesomeSauce76 are indeed worth your time to read.

Here is the Link to The Last Tango in Forks: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5918985/1/

So, tell us, what did you think? Are you reading Last Tango in Forks? Do you follow Indefinable1? Leave us a comment and let us know what you think. Thank you for taking the time to read Southern Fan Fiction Review!!

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